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Let Me be Your Lover, Scarecrow...

“Nonono, this would never work out. Don’t you see? Why do you yearn me so?” The Scarecrow explained to the little black bird who constantly followed him with no halt, and seemingly found him irresistible. The Scarecrow leant down on to the wooden picket fence.
The little Raven turned her head and stared with adoration.
“Oh please…don’t torture me so little Raven. I’m a scarecrow and you are well… a bird. My job is to scare you away, not bring you to me. I can’t allow you to hang around in my fields. My master would surely get angered and maybe even through me out. So please understand.”
The Raven bowed down her head in regret, and then stared back up with affection.
“Aww, don’t look at me like that please.” They exchanged stared, the Scarecrow gazing in to the deep dark eyes of the amazing creature. He sighed heavily “Although, you are a cute little bird…” But he quickly shook his head “No no no, I’m sorry. Besides, it would never work out.”
The Raven saddened, hopelessly staring.
“However… it does get quite lonely…being a scarecrow in these fields. Seldom do people visit, and when they do, it’s only pick their crop. Never do they bother bringing me a change of clothes, or perhaps stay for a chat…
The raven nodded understanding and empathy.
“I’m so happy someone agrees with me, you are a clever bird aren’t you?”
The Raven hopped up on to the Scarecrows shoulder, and began to gently adjust the stray strands of hay in his clothes, picking of the grains of dirt and stroking away the dust with her feathers.
“Oh fine…” The Scarecrow sighed and began to walk down the dusty path, “I suppose you can stay for a wile. Maybe we could take a stroll?”
©2008-2009 ~Scarecrowlover
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Author's Comments

I decided to do something…Scarecrowlover related. And here it is. Hope you guys like it.
This is the first time I submit text, so I might have messed up something…and forgive my spelling errors, I just can’t manage to catch the at times. ^^;

Ho deciso di fare qualcosa a riguardo di…Scarecrowlove. Ed eccolo qui, spero che vi piace.
E’ la prima volta che aggiungo un testo a dA quindi potrei aver sbagliato qualcosa…e perdonate i mie errori di ortografia, non riesco proprio a vederli avvolte. ^^;

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:icont-a-g-m:
Well, Pretty good for a first time. I'm impressed.

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Questions have answers. Everything has balance. Things are all conected; it's just hard to see it at first.
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Thanx hehe. I'm pretty happy about it, and i would like to continue it. :)

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:iconandrephmcr:
WoW!
I'm impressed too!
:iconscarecrowlover:
Thanx so much :3

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:iconwildsoulgirl:
Mjjiiiiiiikkk......!!!!!!!!!! :heart::love::love::heart:
How adorable...! :heart::lol:
:iconscarecrowlover:
Thank you!!!!!!! It means allot to me. XD. I love writing short stories. (Well, this is more of a mini mini story...)

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:iconwildsoulgirl:
I know that 'cause you're such an author..! :lol:
BTW, how's it goin' with your other story? :D
I'm curious about how it continues..! :XD::lol:
:iconscarecrowlover:
My gosh, that thing is driving me crazy hahaha.
It going great. It’s at 27.000 words, I'm aiming to cut the first book at 40.000, but I want to make sure that I stop it at a good enough cliff hanger to get people to read the next one.
I've changed it allot since the first draft. Not the story as much as the wording. The story is the same. Only i put a small prelude of about 3 chapters to explain the characters a bit better before the journey. Ended up being 10.000 words... X.X oh well.
Another problem is that the first 3 chapters explained allot so I didn't need the explanations in the original “First Chapter” to make people understand. I try to follow the rule "Don't explain it, show it".
I turned the maturity knob a bit as well, (And No, I do not mean sex or bad language if that’s what you were thinking… )- Just the whole wording used and character vies on the world.
So yes, after these crazy modifications I had to re read everything to maintain consistency.
Still, I'm afraid I delayed the actual journey back a little too much and I may not get to the event I was wishing to cut at. Oh well, this stuff happens to me all the time. Hey, I’m still an amateur anyway, I must learn eventually...
I need to extend the flash back as well.

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